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Wednesday, September 23, 2009

essay #2 using Example

Fast food can’t win over Home Cooking

Fast food can never measure up to the pure enjoyment of a home-cooked meal. Although fast food is convenient when someone is in a hurry or when there is no time for cooking, it usually lacks the taste and satisfaction of a meal from your or someone else’s kitchen. Fast food restaurants, through their television commercials and newspaper coupons, try to make their food look very appetizing. But when you finally buy their food, it just never is as good as advertized. You could almost think that they don’t really care about the quality of their food; they just want your money. However, when it comes to a home-cooked, the cook cares more about making sure that the meal is enjoyable, rather than hurrying you out of their house. This is why home-cooking will always win over fast food.

We all can remember of bad experiences at fast food restaurants. For me, I recently visited a fast food restaurant, stepped to the counter and placed my order. At this particular restaurant I could watch the people in the back prepare my meal. The cook was just slapping the meat, lettuce, onions, and pickles onto my burger. The whole time the cook was preparing the burger, it appeared that he had not once looked down to see if everything was in order or if he really cared at all. When the number on my receipt was called, I took my food, filled up my drink, and found a seat hoping to enjoy a good meal. I knew that I should check my food since I had just witnessed the sloppy way in which it was prepared. I pulled out my fries and they looked fine, after all it is kind of hard to mess up fries. I then got my burger out and opened it up. As expected, it looked like it was just thrown together. It didn’t look the least bit appetizing. The lettuce was limp and pale. The burger looked like a piece of leather and the bun was flat. Somehow the version of the burger from television didn’t quite make it to my tray. I couldn’t bring myself to eating this poorly prepared burger, so I tossed it in the trash can and finished off my fries. I then headed home to get something good to eat. While not all of my visits to fast food restaurants end this way, more often than not I leave less than satisfied with my meal.

In contrast to my fast food experiences, thoughts of home-cooked meals bring happiness to my heart or more specifically my stomach. One example of a good home-cooking memory is the annual trip our family has taken to north Georgia state parks. These trips involve seven families who stay in three cabins for the Columbus Day weekend. Our activities during this weekend include hiking, fishing, and white water rafting, all which are great fun. But, my favorite part of the trip each year is enjoying the home-cooked meals prepared by the families in each cabin. Each family picks one night to prepare dinner for the entire group. Each day we are there, the sounds of dishes clanging and the smell of home-cooked food fills the air around the cabin. By the time dinner rolls around, everyone is tired and hungry from the day’s activities. Everyone meets in the house that provides the meal for that day. Upon entering the cabin, conversations about the current football games or some special event that took place that day are heard. Amidst these conversations are wonderful smells that greet everyone entering the cabin. The family who prepared the meal welcomes everyone with a smile on their face. When the food is finally on my plate and the first bite has been taken, there is a satisfaction in my stomach that only a home-cooked could produce.

Another example of a good home-cooked meal would be at my Grandmother’s house on a Sunday after church. When I walk in the door of her house, I am greeted by the smell either of mushrooms frying on the stove or of a casserole in the oven. While I wait in the den, watching the NFL football game that is showing, I can’t help but feel the growls in my stomach as my mind is preparing me for the delicious meal about to be consumed. The wonderful aroma of all the food that has been cooked soon over takes me and I can’t wait any longer. When my grandmother says that dinner is ready, I jump up and run to the table to see the feast that has been prepared. After the blessing, I then fill my plate with a portion of everything she has cooked. After seconds and thirds of my favorite dishes, my stomach is soon filled to capacity and then some. No fast food restaurant can come close to competing with a home-cooked meal at grandmother’s house on a Sunday after church.

It is often said the way to a man’s heart is through his stomach. However, the way to this man’s heart is not with just any cooking. Don’t bring to me food prepared at a fast food restaurant if you want to win my heart and my stomach. It better be a home-cooked meal.

Sunday, September 20, 2009

AHH this rain needs to go away

My yard is flooded, our street was washed out, and i need to get to school tomorrow. I hope i can find a way out of here. Well if i can i'll be at school. I enjoy the rain but this is just too much.

Tuesday, September 15, 2009

The greatest challenge I had with writing this paper was trying to figure out how to get my jump drive out of a Mac. I stayed in class for about twenty minutes and still couldn't figure it out. So i finally called my dad at Warner Robins Air Force Base. He went around to all of his employees til he found someone who owned a Mac personally and asked them how to take it out. So now i know how to work this computer and i'm learning everyday. 


I enjoyed reading the other blogs. I got to know the people who i might not have met before in my life. I never received any comments  on my blog even tho i fixed the commenting problem so I didn't need to look back at it. I just saw that one of the people i was assigned hadn't have their essay up til that Sunday but they still got it up before the next class so i did get to complement on theirs after they fixed their complementing problem too. But i really enjoyed writing this essay and look forward to writing more.

Friday, September 11, 2009

9/11 Rememberance

Today is a day when you remember the people in the World Trade Centers and Pentagon and in Pennsylvania. When you see someone in Uniform tomorrow tell them thank you becuase i wish i could tell my good friend John Thank You again. So today I will be ...remembering him and the thousands of other troops killed in the War. Even in the airport it makes a army or marine's day to hear you say "Thank You".

Thursday, September 10, 2009

Just got my paper back

Boy do i have some revisions and corrections to do.

what a morning

Today I woke up ten minutes before i had to leave so I could get to school to get a parking spot. I got ready in what seemed to be the fastest ten minutes ever. On the way to school I was almost hit by a car that crossed my  lane without even looking. My car has a powerful engine that makes my tires spin everywhere. It is even a front wheel drive although i have to admit i do try sometimes to do it. Except, this morning my car did it right in front of a cop and all i could do was old my hands up saying i didn't mean to and keep on going. Finally i get to school scarf down my chocolate sundae pop tart and make my way to class. Man what a wet thursday morning it has been for me.

Monday, September 7, 2009

Labor Day weekend

My labor day weekend has been great. I got to see my family from all over the states. I found out that one of my very good friends became my cousin a couple of weeks ago. I went to see the excellent Inglourious Basterds movie, it was also a bit of a comical movie. Labor Day or today we cooked out and ate some good hamburgers. I missed a rodeo in Alabama this weekend to be able to see my family but i am ready for the nest one that comes up.

Wednesday, September 2, 2009

essay Final Draft

A Night to Remember

The date was 3 December, 2005. As memories go, this was one moment in time that I will remember forever. While the date itself may fade from my memory, the events of that night and those that led up to it over the preceding week are just as fresh to me today as they were three years ago. I am sure that one day I will even tell my kids about it. It was on this particular night that Peach County High School, my high school, achieved the ultimate goal in athletics. We were crowned state football champions for the first time in our school’s history!

While the actual game was played on that particular night, the events that I will remember actually began the Saturday before. The semi-final games were being played at the Georgia Dome. My family and I were cheering for our team, but at the same time we didn’t know if we might be watching what could be our last football game of the season. The opponent was LaGrange and we just didn’t know if we were good enough to beat them. Somehow we ended up winning that game with the score of 35 to 17 and that meant we were going to be playing in the championship against Dougherty County. Everyone in the stands was cheering and air-horns were blowing. I knew that it was a big deal to have won the game, but I hadn’t realized just what had happened and what it would lead to at the moment.

The next week at school you could tell that things were different and that this would not be just a typical week. There was a change in how people acted and even in how they did their school work. All the football players were trying their hardest in all their classes so that they would have a chance to play in the game. The halls were covered with black and gold ribbons hanging from the ceiling tiles. Large paper banners covered the walls, some saying “Let’s go Trojans” and others saying “We can do it, bring it home Trojans”. Every day was filled with excitement and anticipation of the big game.

Finally, Friday had arrived and it was game day. That day at school I saw the biggest pep rally ever for a football game. The band was wearing their gold and black uniforms and their hats were black and had a feather on top. I could barely hear what my friend was telling me because the band was playing so loud and so strong. The excitement of the week had built up and everyone was totally psyched for the game. We couldn’t wait until it was game time. After the pep rally everyone went home to get ready to travel down to Dougherty County High School for the big game.

When I got home my parents had already started to pack up the car to get ready to leave. My mom had a big smile on her face and was almost as excited as me. She had graduated from Peach County High School many years before and was looking forward to seeing her team hopefully win a state championship. My dad was excited too, but was a little stressed from making sure everything was packed in the car. I went inside and was immediately greeted by the unmistakable and irresistible smell of Krystal sandwiches on the table. After everyone had finished eating we met up with my aunt who was riding with us and started our way down to the game which was being played at Dougherty’s home field in Albany, Ga. Much of my thoughts on the way down were on the game. I do, however, remember looking out the window as we passed someone’s land that had just been burned to clear out the old crops. The soil was black and every few spaces you would see bright green grass poking through the soil. About fifteen minutes after passing the fields we entered Dougherty County.

The whole day had been cold and wet as rain showers had moved through the area. By the time we had got to Albany it was already dark outside. I can remember my aunt saying to my dad, “Jim try to find the closest parking spot you can, this area doesn’t really look too safe”. We found a spot on an overcrowded street filled with every type of car. When I stepped outside the vehicle the cool crisp wind greeted my face and started to make my ears cold. But, I also could hear in the distance the sounds of the bands and see the lights from the stadium. My heart started to beat a little faster as the excitement of the moment was setting in.

After a short walk we reached the ticket gates going into the stadium where my mom said, “I hope we will be able to find some seats”. The stadium was old and was actually built down into a valley and very much like a bowl made of rock. We could hear the sounds of the fans already in the stadium, but we could not see anything because of the white concrete block walls that formed the outer areas of the stadium. About the only thing we could see was that on either end of the field there were rock walls about 60 feet tall.

We finally got our tickets and made our way into the stadium. Once there we could see that there were people everywhere. The stands were filled to capacity and there were still people coming in. Since I was just a freshman in high school, I had never seen so many people at a high school football game before. When we were standing outside the gates I couldn’t fully imagine the size of the stadium. I told my mom that there had to be over ten thousand people here. It almost felt like I was at a University of Georgia football game just on a smaller scale. My dad took off hurriedly looking for some seats and in a few minutes returned to us and said, “I have found some seats down near the field.”

When we finally squeezed through the crowd and reached our seats, that was when I could finally see what I had come to. It was going to be a very special night, if only we could win. The noise of the crowd only grew as game time approached. We could feel the spirit in the air when our football team stormed the field. The air temperature was not too cold, but just crisp enough to make it good football weather. The smell of hotdogs coming from the grills and the scent of warm apple cider coming from my mom’s thermos filled the air around me and made it feel that much more like a football game.

On the opposite side of the field we could see the tightly packed fans of our opponents dressed in blue and silver waiting for their team to enter the stadium. Even though it was a home game for them, I could easily tell that there were more people at the game from Peach County than there were of Dougherty. About five rows in front of us there were two men from Dougherty who thought it would be fun to sit on our side of the field. Through all of the pre-game activities they were standing up telling everyone around them how their team was going to win and how bad we were going to lose. I guess they thought that their team would win easily and that they could celebrate in front of us all night long. Needless to say, they were not welcomed at all by a large number of Peach County fans who were sitting around them.

Shortly after 7:30pm, the game finally got started. Our seats were next to the Peach County band so even when things weren’t going well the band always seemed to bring back the excitement. Our band was either playing or shouting something to the fans. The crisp night soon began to turn colder as the wind picked up. With the wind swirling through the stands, we sat there freezing our ears off to watch this wonderful football game. Luckily, my hands were now accompanied by a hot pouch which we all had in our jackets. Every once in awhile there was a man sitting down in front of us who would blow a duck caller and that sound would put a smile on everyone’s face.

For much of the first quarter the game remained very close. About five minutes into the second quarter it started to sprinkle but that didn’t make anyone move and give up their seat. We sat there with the cold light rain watching the back and forth game. Through the skill of our players, the score began to turn in our favor as our team took a ten point lead into halftime. The men in front of us had finally sat down and we were finally happy to watch the halftime show without someone yelling at us.

During halftime it was time for our impressive band to take the field and give a wonderful show. Peach County has long been known for its outstanding bands, but tonight they performed as never before and kept the excitement of our fans going. The other school’s band was good and their cheerleaders danced provocatively, turning many peoples’ heads on our side of the field. But like their football team, they couldn’t compete with the kids from Peach County.

After halftime the football game got back underway and everyone knew that the state championship would be settled in the next twenty-four minutes of football. Our team continued to play well and soon turned the ten point lead into a fourth quarter twenty point lead. The men in front of us finally got up and started to leave. While they were leaving, everyone within ten rows of them, including my family, started to sing “Na, Na, Hey, Hey, Goodbye” and at that time it finally hit me that we were, for the first time in our school’s history, going to win the championship. When the sound of the final buzzer went off, the stands erupted in celebration that was louder than ever, it was something I will never forget. The score was an amazing 35 to 14 victory. People were jumping up and down, giving hugs and high-fiving people that they didn’t even know. During the celebration, my mother had gotten a call from my granddad telling her that UGA had beaten LSU in the SEC Championship football game that same night which only made the night that much more exciting. My mother said to me, “I am so happy that both of the schools I attended won big games this very night!” No one cared at that moment how cold it was or how cold our ears and hands were. Everyone just knew that we did it! We won the championship. Everyone shouted, “We are the Trojans, the mighty, mighty Peach County Trojans!”

After the game we bought a championship car sticker from someone in the stands, got all of our game gear together and headed off to the nearest McDonalds to get some sweet tea and something to eat. On the way home no one could go to sleep because we couldn’t believe what our eyes had just seen. We honked our car’s horn every time we passed a school bus full of Peach County students and players. When we finally got home, I ran from the warmth of the car to the house to avoid the cold breeze outside. That weekend everyone could not stop talking about what had happened.

The Monday morning at school, after that marvelous Friday night, people were still talking and celebrating our victory. Before the morning announcements began, the office played the song “We are the Champions” throughout the whole school. What a moment that I will never forget! The next year’s football season was just as great as this one. We won the state championship again, but that is another story for another time. I am so glad that I can say I was at Peach County High School when we won our first ever state championship.

Tuesday, September 1, 2009

My Memory Essay super rough draft

A Night to Remember

            My family and I were sitting at what we thought was going to be our last football game of the season. Somehow we ended up winning that game and that meant we were going to the championship against Dougherty County. Everyone in the stands was cheering and air-horns were blowing, and I hadn’t realized what had happened at the moment.

The next week at school there was a change in how people acted about how they did their school work. All the football players were trying their hardest in all their classes to make good so that they would have a chance to play in the game. The halls were covered with black and gold ribbons hanging from the ceiling tiles. Large paper banners covered the walls, some saying “Let’s go Trojans”, and “We can do it, bring it home Trojans”.

That day at school I saw the biggest pep rally ever for a football game. The band was wearing their uniforms which were gold and black; their hats were black and had a feather on top. I could barely hear what my friend was telling me because the band was playing so loud. After the pep rally everyone went their ways home to get ready to travel down to Dougherty County High School for the big game.

When I got home my parents had already started to pack up the car to get ready to leave. My mom had a big smile on her face, and dad was covered in sweat from packing the car. I went inside and could smell the Krystal sandwiches on the table. After everyone had finished eating we met up with my aunt and started our way there. I remember looking out the window as we passed someone’s land that had just been burned to clear out the old crops. The soil was black and every few spaces you would see bright green leaves poking through the soil.

The whole day had been cold and wet as rain showers had moved through. By the time we had gotten to Dougherty County High School it was already dark outside and I can remember my aunt saying to my dad “Jim try to find the closest parking spot you can, this area doesn’t really look to safe”.  We found a spot on an overcrowded street filled with every type of car. When I stepped outside the vehicle the cool crisp wind greeted my face and started to make my ears cold.

When we reached the gates going into the stadium my mom said “I hope we will be able to find some seats”. There were people everywhere and since I was just a freshman in high school I had never seen so many people at a high school football game. We finally got our tickets and made our way to the gates. When we were standing outside the gates I couldn’t fully imagine the size of the stadium.

My dad returned to us and said “I have some seats down near the field. When we finally squeezed through the crowd and got to our seat that was when I could finally see what I have come to. The stadium was built into a bowl made of rock. On either end of the field there were rock walls about 60 feet tall. The stands were filled to capacity and there were still people coming in. I told my mom that there had to be over five thousand people here. It almost felt like I was at a University of Georgia football game. The noise of the crowd never really did settle down. You could feel the spirit in the air when our football team stormed the field. The smell of hotdogs coming from the grills and the smell of apple cider coming from my mom’s thermos filled the air around me.

On the opposite side of the field we could see the tightly packed opponents waiting for their team to enter the field. I could easily tell that there were a whole lot more people there from Peach County than there were of the home team. In front of us there were two men from Dougherty who thought it would be fun to sit on our side of the field. They were not welcomed at all by all who were sitting there. The whole game they were standing up telling how they will win and how bad we will lose. 

We sat next to the band so even when things weren’t going good the band always seems to bring back that excitement inside of you. Our band was either playing or shouting something to the fans going. Against the wind we sat there freezing our ears off to watch this wonderful football game. Every once in awhile there was a man sitting down in front of us who would blow a duck caller and that sound would put a smile on everyone face. At half time the game was close and finally it was time for our impressive band to take the field and give a wonderful show. The other school’s band was great but the cheerleaders danced provocatively and that turned many peoples’ heads on our side of the field.

After half time the football got back underway and now there was the smell of peanuts. My hands were now accompanied by a hot pouch which we all had in our jackets. About five minutes into the second quarter it started to sprinkle but that didn’t make anyone move and give up their seat. We sat there with the cold rain and our ears still cold watching the football game. After the second quarter we were up ten points and the men in front of us had finally sat down. We were finally happy to watch the game without someone yelling at us. 

We were now in the fourth quarter with ten minutes to go and we were up twenty points. The men in front of us finally got up and started to leave. While they were leaving everyone within ten rows of them including my family started to sing “Na, Na, Hey, Hey, Goodbye” and that put everyone in mood that we were for the first time in our school’s history going to win the Championship.  When the sound of the buzzer went off the stands were louder than ever and that is something I will never forget. My mother had gotten a call from my granddad who had told her that UGA had beaten GT. My mother told me “I am so happy that both of the schools I have gone to one this very night”.  No one cared at that moment how cold it was and how cold our ears and hands were. Everyone just knew that we did it, we won the championship. Everyone said we are the true Trojans, Peach County Trojans.

After the game, after we bought car stickers which still haven’t been used, we got our stuff together and headed off to the nearest McDonalds to get some sweet tea. On the way home no one could go to sleep because we couldn’t believe what our eyes had just seen. We honked our car’s horn every time we passed a school bus full of Peach County students and players. When we finally got home I ran from the warmth of the car to the house to avoid the cold breeze outside. That weekend everyone was still talking about what had happened.

The Monday morning after that marvelous Friday night people at school were still talking. Before the morning announcements began the office played the song “We are the Champions” over the whole school. The next year’s football season was just as great as this one. We won the State Championship again, but that is another story for another time. I am so glad that I can say I was at Peach County High School when we won our first ever State Championship.